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reddevil013
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0 posted 2008-04-27 04:54 PM


The fog cleared
And the blur before me began to take form
It was an image of a man
He was about my height
And looked surprisingly a lot like me too
But I knew he wasn’t
He was standing there, smiling
His deep, brown eyes
Somehow staring right into mine yet seeing right through me
I returned the gaze
I studied the image carefully, for I suspected it would be one I would never forget
The man’s hands were coated with drying blood
His face was covered with scratches, blood dripping from some of the deeper ones
His shirt was ripped and half hanging at his waist
There was a big blotch right where his heart should have been
But it wasn’t there
Instead it lay at his feet, miraculously beating steadily
Squirting out little bits of some more blood
And sucking it right back in
It made the only sound of the otherwise silent night
It lay next to a knife, dull and rust in colour
That, too, was covered in drying blood
I shifted uncomfortably
I didn’t like his smile
It stayed only at his lips
His eyes remained cold and almost lifeless
It was a humourless smile
A smile without style, you could call it
He began to speak softly
His lips barely moving
He murmured in a voice so low
So incomprehensible, I doubted even he could hear himself
But then again, he was just an image
An image in a mirror
Showing exactly what it saw
Which obviously was not me
I knew it wasn’t me
I would never take another man’s life
Except my own, maybe?
I would never seem as lifeless as he seemed
Unless I was dead
I would never feel no fear at all
Unless I was beyond fear
That’s why I knew this wasn’t me
I know me
He may look like me, but looks only go so far
That’s why I knew this wasn’t me
That’s why I knew…
That’s why…

R.D

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