»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #42
»
Worthy Of You
| Open Poetry #42 |
|
Worthy Of You |
|
|
rad802 Member
since 2008-04-19
Posts 279KY U.S.A. 
|
If I could carve my name on your heart like your face is burned in my memory. If I could join contentment and hardship like you've wrapped your love around me. Maybe I would know what to say know what to feel know what to do to be worthy of you. If I could make a difference somehow like you've colored my life with your wonder. If I could manage the circumstance that fights me like you hold back the rain when you shine. Maybe I would know when to breath know when to rest know when I grew to be worthy of you. Love is a mystery sparing neither stranger nor friend It overwhelms and compels carrying you away to an unimagined place It often leaves a stain time cannot erase. If I could live a life so pure like you've often heard the sages tell. If I could linger in each moment like you'll always been a part of me. Maybe I'd believe in myself believe what I see believe it's all true and be worthy of you. Rick Delmonico |
||
| © Copyright 2008 RAD802 - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
From reading your adoring words, I'd wager that you ARE worthy of her!   EA |
||
|
Mountain Goat Junior Member
since 2008-04-06
Posts 32High Places |
Oh this is beautiful!! Echoes how I am feeling about someone at the moment too  Thanks for sharing! |
||
|
shyvl Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531texas, usa |
These are the lines I liked best At the first of the poem when you intertwined a longer and a shorter repetive stanza. I thought that was the best section of the piece. It made for an incredible rthymn. thanks for sharing sharyn |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
