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0 posted 2008-04-27 05:05 AM


Kokoro niwa

Nani mo nai desu

Owaru ima



In the heart

Nothing more left

Now finished



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1 posted 2008-04-27 05:13 AM


Victor,

Beautiful in any language.

Alison

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Realms of Light
2 posted 2008-04-27 09:40 AM




It is so sad when there is
nani mo nai desu
kokoro niwa
~ and all is
owaru ima.



EA


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3 posted 2008-04-27 10:43 AM


Victor~
Sometimes the saddest thoughts also contain such beauty~
This is one of those circumstances~


*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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4 posted 2008-04-27 04:25 PM


It sounds nice in different words!-- Enjoyed the moving write



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5 posted 2008-04-27 04:29 PM


Both stanzas sound lovely but heartbreaking. Wish I was multilinqual
sharyn

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