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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2008-04-27 12:10 PM


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God I love
The color blue

The sea
The sky
And somehow you


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© Copyright 2008 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
Seoulair
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1 posted 2008-04-27 01:30 AM


Beautiful song.
Which reminded me of Countess Blueskaya

tnhness
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2 posted 2008-04-27 04:07 AM


ha! that's great. god i love the sea too.
2islander2
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3 posted 2008-04-27 04:14 AM


Very subtle poetry, i enjoy it.

  yann

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4 posted 2008-04-27 04:30 PM


John, I love this because it shows a bit of the inside of you.  I enjoy your poetry a lot.

Alison

Artic Wind
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5 posted 2008-04-27 04:32 PM


I love the color blue myself!--Which is funny because I love the element water!

Wonderful write Huan Yi

....

ARCTIC WIND

shyvl
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6 posted 2008-04-27 04:37 PM


Love the way you write some simple yet filled with such intense emtions.
sharyn  Looking forward to more from your pen.

The Shadow in Blue
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7 posted 2008-04-28 02:15 PM


Loved the poem. It was very witty and to the point, an enviable skill indeed.

Much love for blue

~J.

[This message has been edited by The Shadow in Blue (04-28-2008 03:50 PM).]

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8 posted 2008-04-28 08:33 PM


nice

Larrysmom
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9 posted 2008-04-28 09:56 PM


Again you say so much with so few and just blow me away…

Tammy<333

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10 posted 2008-05-02 12:44 PM


Ah, here's one I've missed.....it's a pleasure to read you again, my friend.

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11 posted 2008-05-02 03:59 PM


I love a short poem that's long on substance. This one is a real beauty!

Art

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