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Open Poetry #42

Wonder Why

reddevil013
Junior Member

since 2008-04-26

Posts 12
ON, Canada

0 posted 2008-04-26 11:11 PM

I wonder why
I exist on this earth
Why my mom
Was made to give me birth

I wonder why
The sun rises
It goes across the sky
Giving shadows different sizes

I wonder why
Flowers blossom
Whatever the reason
It happens and it’s awesome

But most of all
I wonder how I knew
The moment we met
That I was going to love you

R.D

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

1 posted 2008-04-27 01:13 AM

nice writing, Reddevil.
Ida

Seoulair
Senior Member

since 2008-03-27

Posts 807
Seoul S.Korea

2 posted 2008-04-27 01:36 AM

very nice.

A warm welcome to this wonderful PIP land.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2008-04-27 10:48 AM

RD~

'I wonder how I knew
The moment we met
That I was going to love you'

Is that not the total beauty of this feeling of love~

Indeed, indeed~

Welcome to our circle of poets and friends~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

reddevil013
Junior Member

since 2008-04-26

Posts 12
ON, Canada

4 posted 2008-04-27 11:53 AM

Thank you. I am glad to have finally found a place to actually get reviews for what I write

And yes, it really is the true beauty of love

R.D

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

5 posted 2008-04-27 04:23 PM

Enjoyed your first post!--

WELCOME TO PIP!

ARCTIC WIND

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