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xTr3m3sT
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0 posted 2008-04-26 02:23 PM


More then once have I seen people
who are on there knees praying at a church steaple
speaking and crying with tears of regret
but then the next day they go and disrespect
God and his forgiveness because they do the same thing again
it's amazing to me how much forgiveness God can lend
I am one of these people, I have disrespected him more then once
and I apologize, now I am trying to regain his trust.
I am following in his footsteps to the best of my ability
and at the same time, giving my faith some credibility
by researching different aspects of the bible
and shoot out facts from it like a rifle
to put those non believers in a good light
and I know these things will be one hell of a fight
but I know what I am doing is right
and I will continue to learn God's word dispite
the negativity surrounding my aura
but this is my new life, a new era
to follow in his guidance and path
and I know people will look at me and laugh
and say ''this kid is stupid he doesn't know crap''
but what I believe they need a reality slap
because sooner then later revalations will come
and I will be with my God, and not in this slum.

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Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25
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1 posted 2008-04-26 07:34 PM


Yo Angel,

You have the right idea here.  Never let anyone call you stupid.

I like these two lines:

"and say ''this kid is stupid he doesn't know crap''
but what I believe they need a reality slap"

That's the spirit.

Bobby

xTr3m3sT
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2 posted 2008-04-26 07:48 PM


Thank you Bobby, I'm trying to be a child of God and eventually a man of God.
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