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ctowen
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0 posted 2008-04-26 01:02 PM



for all that is wrong there is a right
for all that is right there is a left
for all that is left there is what's taken ...

for all that is taken there is a theft


for all that is loved there is hate
for all that is hated there is someone's hell
for all that is hell there is fate

for all that is fate there is someone's cell


for all that is questioned there is an answer
for all that is answered there is a lie
for all that is lied there is a cancer ...

for all the cancers there is but to try


for all that is known there is what's forgotten
for all that is forgotten there is a loss
for all that is lost there is nothing

for all that is nothing there is a cost ...

In rhythms to a rise the days shall follow ... each Yesterday, each Tomorrow.   -  Ct/05

              

© Copyright 2008 C. Thomas Owen - All Rights Reserved
Seoulair
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1 posted 2008-04-26 01:15 PM


Marvelous. enjoyed the read.
r v wooo
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2 posted 2008-04-26 01:16 PM


interesting...the resulting dichotomies that  develop and ultimately there is an end.
ctowen
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3 posted 2008-04-26 01:24 PM


... for all that ends isn't there a new beginning?

    thank you both for your comments

Ct

Earth Angel
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4 posted 2008-04-26 02:13 PM


From the alpha to the omega ~ to a new alpha! lol

The push and pulls ~ the to and fros ~ for every action there is an opposite and equal reaction! ~ and so on, and so on, ...

Intriguing write!


EA



Artic Wind
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5 posted 2008-04-26 02:37 PM


Interesting Write!



ARCTIC WIND

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6 posted 2008-04-26 05:18 PM


Ct,

I keep reading this one because it fascinates me.  It's all a big circle, isn't it.  You wrote this very well.

A

ctowen
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7 posted 2008-04-26 06:24 PM


even circles have great depth ....
    it's what we learn and do along its way that signifies to what extent our own circles travel

       .... I like to write in a way everyone can see a little something a long the way

Thank you everyone for the read and your comments

Ct

Marchmadness
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8 posted 2008-04-26 07:00 PM


I like this , it is intriguing.
                         Ida

nakdthoughts
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9 posted 2008-04-26 07:55 PM


Hey you! Since when did you move to CA?

Enjoyed your  deep thoughts~~

M

steavenr
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10 posted 2008-04-26 09:52 PM


interesting, and as other have stated, intriguing...each time it is read it brings a new appreciation for your word choices
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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11 posted 2008-04-29 06:04 AM


Ctowen... you write the wonderful so well... I love this and will be sending it to my library.. thank you .. love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

2islander2
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12 posted 2008-04-29 11:58 AM


very  profound. The ending made me smile.

  yann

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