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Open Poetry #42

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ILoveTheRain
Member

since 2008-03-02

Posts 157
GA

0 posted 2008-04-25 10:59 PM

Tick tock, Tick tock
As time rolls around
My dead mind is at rest
Sleeping without a sound

I cannot seem to vision anything
All of my thoughts caved in
No movement, only the noise
Of my silent, steady breaths within

Just lying on my bed thinking
There’s no sign of a dream tonight
Another day, once again
But I won’t give up without a fight

Caliban
Member

since 2008-04-23

Posts 57

1 posted 2008-04-25 11:10 PM

Very interesting. I especially like the second verse. I've had a lot of nights like that. Very cool

Muna seasaimid le ceartas, ní sheasfaidh ceartas linn - Francis Bacon

Seoulair
Senior Member

since 2008-03-27

Posts 807
Seoul S.Korea

2 posted 2008-04-26 06:30 PM

I like this poem. It is very good. love the read.

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