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Alison
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Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

0 posted 2008-04-25 12:50 PM



    

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Margherita
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1 posted 2008-04-25 12:52 PM


Yes, it does! Delightful words and picture, dear Alison!

Love,
Margherita

Earth Angel
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2 posted 2008-04-25 12:54 PM


"Yet perfection shines"

~ as does your own!!!

Captivating!

Love,
Linda

2islander2
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3 posted 2008-04-25 01:48 PM


Hello Alison, You used wonderfully your computer for mixing writing and photography...

  yann

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4 posted 2008-04-25 04:40 PM


Perfect combination, Alison.
                         Ida

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5 posted 2008-04-25 04:54 PM


Too true Alison-Perfection shines through in your poem. It is simply sweet.


J.

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6 posted 2008-04-25 05:07 PM


Wonderful...James
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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7 posted 2008-04-25 09:29 PM


Perfection indeed my sweet Ali-girl... just beautiful like you ... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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8 posted 2008-04-25 09:31 PM


Beautiful haiku. It takes skill to make so little say so much. And the picture completes it perfectly. Vey nice

Muna seasaimid le ceartas, nĂ­ sheasfaidh ceartas linn - Francis Bacon

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9 posted 2008-04-25 09:58 PM


Excellent poetic and photo. imagery!

serious applause!!

Robert E. Jordan
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10 posted 2008-04-25 10:11 PM


Alison,

This is a real, live, living haiku.  Very good work.

Bobby

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11 posted 2008-04-25 10:58 PM


Just lovely Alison!-- I love the ending because it speaks such volume!



ARCTIC WIND

LindsayP
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12 posted 2008-04-26 10:52 PM



Beautiful Alison, just beautiful,

much enjoyed.

Lindsay

Alison
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13 posted 2008-04-27 01:27 AM


Lovely Margherita,

Thank you.

xoxoxo
Ali
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Linda,

Beautiful friend, thank you.

xoxoxo
Alison
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Yann,

Thank you.  I discovered a passion for photograhs when I came on line.  Now, I take photographs and try to incorporate them into my poems. It is something that brings me a lot of pleasure.  And, I do love flowers!

Alison
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Thank you, Ida.  I am glad that you enjoyed this one.

A
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J.

Thank you so much.  I am really happy that you liked this.

Alison
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James,

Thank you.  I bet that you are surrounded by beautiful flowers.  I would love to come and photograph them. This one was taken in Florida last week.  I love Hibiscus.

Hugs,
Ali
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RDB,

Your love of me is blinding you (laughs) -- I am far from perfect.  But, I love how you see me and the friendship that you share with me.

xoxoxo
Ali
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Caliban,

I love Haiku because it is so simple and beautiful.  I am really working on learning to write good Haiku.  Thank you.

Alison
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Bruce,

You know that your opinion means a lot to me.  I also know that photography is your first love.  Your praise has made me happy -- I think of you.

Alison
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Bobby,

You brough such a big smile to my face.

Thank you,
Alison
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AW,

Thank you.  You are always so kind.

Alison
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Lindsay,

Thank you.  I just want to hug you when you comment on my poetry.  You are so danged kind.

xoxoxo
Alison


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14 posted 2008-04-27 02:01 AM


just beautiful!!
Alison
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15 posted 2008-04-27 02:18 AM


Seoulair,

Thank you very much.

Alison

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