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Open Poetry #42

Ode to Dorian

DarkenedOrange
Junior Member

since 2008-04-21

Posts 13

0 posted 2008-04-25 11:59 AM

Her bronze skin radiates the beauty of nature
The fire of her hair
Matches the passion within
Hours of preparation have made this moment possible
Her pale breasts are as white as the greek goddess’ that she represents
Her body is perfect
(Do you know how many sit-ups she had to do for this?)

Finally, his eyes meet the eyes of his lover
They are as dark as his hair
He just cannot stop staring

She tries to get his attention
But his face is stuck to that mirror
No one has beauty like his

Finally she gets his attention
With all virility he presses her naked body to his
Their bodies in tandem, only a second.

Their eyes meet it seems for the first time
He looks right through her
He finds the one he truly loves
In a mere reflection.
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Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

1 posted 2008-04-25 01:48 PM

Sounds like a match made in heaven to me.
Ida

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2008-04-25 02:05 PM

Very well described narcissism!

But then we do see our own reflection in a lover's eyes. It's intriguing.

Beautiful!

Love,
Margherita

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

3 posted 2008-04-25 05:06 PM

Margherita said it all!

ARCTIC WIND

Caliban
Member

since 2008-04-23

Posts 57

4 posted 2008-04-25 09:45 PM

An interesting work of self-love meeting love of self. Very nice.

Muna seasaimid le ceartas, ní sheasfaidh ceartas linn - Francis Bacon

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

5 posted 2008-04-25 09:56 PM

DarkenedOrange,

You’ve done Oscar Wilde proud. Good work. I like it loads.

Bobby

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

6 posted 2008-04-27 07:27 AM

I enjoyed very much the meeting of the eyes, there is a lot of sensuality there...

yann

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