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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2008-04-24 06:04 AM


lady liquor with velvet eyes
billboards are sexy when sipping
the slow easy rain swallows
from a drifter's northern

and then they build highways
so gypsy wheels drag their jockeys
close enough to remember forgetting
how the curves were before the dreams

hawks are noisy in their boots
flapping in another dust bowl
but scaring the fences to sway
so the dangle legged woman tips

and falls her proper in mudslides
lonely on a white dress is not dirty
it is just lonely with residue
always better the second time around

when riding a storm with a stranger
_______________


daark


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Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2008-04-24 08:07 AM


quote:
lonely on a white dress is not dirty



You always surprise me with your knowledge of human nature, dear D.!

This poem, like all of your work, shows a unique depth of thought, besides the extraordinary use of words, that captivates me always.

Love,
Margherita

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
2 posted 2008-04-24 08:11 AM


when riding a storm with a stranger

yes, I agree Mr Daark....  love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

3 posted 2008-04-24 08:14 AM


"when riding a storm with a stranger"

I imagine Darkdaddy, that riding the storm out, with a stranger would make the storm so much more enjoyable to endure.

Storms, can be, lovely.

Even  now, after all of this time,
the depth of your words and sensitivity to the human spirit still touches me.



Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
4 posted 2008-04-25 05:57 AM


ms mar, ms r&b, ms gs...thanks ladies
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