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HopeS
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0 posted 2008-04-24 02:09 AM





Determined I Have To Be


Keeping myself optimistic
Each day begins anew
Looking on the bright side
That's what I had to do

Half the battle can be won
With self - appreciation
I shall get there in the end
By using determination

If I cast all my doubts aside
Negatives will dissapear
By always having patience
I continued to persevere

In keeping my dreams alive
I can advance confidently
My self -esteem I can grow
If I think more positively

As I call upon inner strength
Determined I have to be
Confidence will be gained
If I start believing in me


HopeĀ©2008


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Artic Wind
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1 posted 2008-04-24 07:43 AM


Good write HopeS-

Always believe in yourself, and you can do anything you put yourself to.

ARCTIC WIND

Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2008-04-24 08:27 AM


Hope~

'Half the battle can be won
With self - appreciation'


Amen !  Amen !  Amen !

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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Seoulair
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3 posted 2008-04-25 12:43 PM


very ,very good. Strength.
LindsayP
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4 posted 2008-04-27 09:44 PM



As I call upon inner strength
Determined I have to be
Confidence will be gained
If I start believing in me

That is certainly the right attitude Hope

You wrote it to perfection, great post.

Lindsay

Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25
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5 posted 2008-04-27 09:47 PM


Yo HopeS,

I gotta tell you.  This is so cool.  I love everything about this poem.

Way to go Hon.

Bobby

shyvl
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since 2008-04-11
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6 posted 2008-04-27 10:08 PM


Hope  What a wonderful anthem of hope.  It takes courage to face life and through our determination we triupmph.  Very well written
sharyn

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7 posted 2008-04-27 10:18 PM


beautiful uplifting piece my friend

much needed in my life so I'm putting this in my library!

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