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Caliban
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since 2008-04-23

Posts 57

0 posted 2008-04-24 12:22 PM

A Description of Beauty

Eyes,
        Deep Pools of Brown
                                        Gold in the Sun
Hair,
       A Shimmering Wave of Silk
                                                 Lustrously Soft to Touch
Skin,
       Sensuously Smooth
                                      A Creamy Perfection
Lips,
        Petal Soft
                       An Unspoken Promise
Voice,
        Beautifully Alive
                                       A Laughing Ray of Sunshine
Touch,
          Gentle
                        Passionate
Heart,
          Caring and Generous
                                                Like No Other’s
Smile,
         Warm and Welcoming
                                           A Precious Gift
Kiss,
       Sweet and Slow
                                Breathtaking
A Description of Beauty,
                                    Caring, Generous, Passionate, Erotic, Loving, Trusting, True, Precious, Unique, A Gift, A Joy, A Need Fulfilled, A Partner, A Friend, A Love

A Description of Beauty…

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Muna seasaimid le ceartas, ní sheasfaidh ceartas linn - Francis Bacon

xTr3m3sT
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since 2008-03-03

Posts 415

1 posted 2008-04-24 12:24 PM

Nice description. =)

I like the uniqueness and form of this poem to :] excellent poem :]

Caliban
Member

since 2008-04-23

Posts 57

2 posted 2008-04-24 12:32 PM

Thanks

steavenr
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since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

3 posted 2008-04-24 12:46 PM

nicely done...specially liked the line:
"A Laughing Ray of Sunshine"

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

4 posted 2008-04-24 05:45 AM

Beautiful writing. Well done.

Seoulair
Senior Member

since 2008-03-27

Posts 807
Seoul S.Korea

5 posted 2008-04-25 12:33 PM

Beautiful. wow, a nice description.

shyvl
Senior Member

since 2008-04-11

Posts 531
texas, usa

6 posted 2008-04-27 04:26 PM

Nicely structured. Lovely to read.
sharyn

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

7 posted 2008-04-27 04:27 PM

This is fun to read and the content is solid. Great job!

A

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

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Realm of Supernatural

8 posted 2008-04-27 04:32 PM

Beauty into words lol

ARCTIC WIND

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

9 posted 2008-04-27 07:05 PM

I like this Alex!

love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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