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Open Poetry #42

floes

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

0 posted 2008-04-24 12:05 PM

passion floes
on rivulets
of forgiveness
flowing shallow
flowing strong
floes of change
floes of doubt
re-arrange
pre-dispose
earthy paths of
passion flows

Seoulair
Senior Member

since 2008-03-27

Posts 807
Seoul S.Korea

1 posted 2008-04-24 12:11 PM

simply beautiful. enjoyed. how interesting that you use the word of Floes.

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

2 posted 2008-04-24 12:19 PM

Excellent write, Steavenr.
Ida

Caliban
Member

since 2008-04-23

Posts 57

3 posted 2008-04-24 12:54 PM

Nice imagery. I like the idea of passion constantly changing.

Muna seasaimid le ceartas, ní sheasfaidh ceartas linn - Francis Bacon

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2008-04-24 08:30 AM

Steaven~
Always nice to read you~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

5 posted 2008-04-24 03:45 PM

Wonderful Read!

ARCTIC WIND

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

6 posted 2008-04-24 10:29 PM

wonderful! love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

7 posted 2008-04-26 07:53 PM

From rain to river, and on to sea.

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