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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. You are gone And that is enough To be forgotten In summer trees The sparrows Are sleeping And who were we For all our fantasies To disturb them At their rest . |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
John, This is a sad poem, but a wise poem. I like it loads. Bobby |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
To know the sparrows are sleeping is to be outside at night... under countless stars and to see your breath if the air is cold enough. Enjoyed this, John. Thank you. |
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shyvl Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531texas, usa |
You express so much so well with so few words. This is one of my favorites of those I have read. sharyn |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
indeed...who are any of us...to 'disturb the universe?!'... interesting, thoughtful 'write!' applause!! |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Your wisdom is showing here, John. Ida |
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Larrysmom Senior Member
since 2008-04-03
Posts 533Florida, USA |
You have made me cry with this one… Tammy<333 |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
"Wow" is probably the most over-used phoneme in the language, but.....Wow. There is so very much in this tiny portrait, that it leaves me at a loss for words of my own. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
one tear |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Sad write there Mr.Huan Yi ARCTIC WIND |
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