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ctowen
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since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

0 posted 2008-04-22 01:30 PM


a sense, a rage
  blood upon a page

  speaking volumes
  when writing one's story

tomorrow's columns,
  yesterday's worry


sentence a line
  then cover and bind

  with each word spilt
  pronounced or unspoken

as long each is felt,
  promise unbroken


truth or fiction
  feed the addiction

  taken to where
  a muse leads the followed

through novel fare,
  booked, read, then borrowed


~*~   ~*~   ~*~   ~*~   ~*~

In rhythms to a rise the days shall follow ... each Yesterday, each Tomorrow.   -  Ct/05

              

© Copyright 2008 C. Thomas Owen - All Rights Reserved
Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348
Florida
1 posted 2008-04-22 01:37 PM


"a sense, a rage
  blood upon a page"

perfection, that opening line.


"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
2 posted 2008-04-22 03:25 PM


spellingbinding indeed you are !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11
waiting for the next installment

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

3 posted 2008-04-22 03:25 PM


perfectly said Craig, and so full of truth.  A pleasure to read you again.  
Seoulair
Senior Member
since 2008-03-27
Posts 807
Seoul S.Korea
4 posted 2008-04-22 03:40 PM


Yes, very good. felt the emotion. I like this.
Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
5 posted 2008-04-22 04:27 PM


love the realism and emotion in this.
                             Ida

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