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poddarku
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since 2008-01-15
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india

0 posted 2008-05-13 10:07 AM



Avenue of rain
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An avenue of rain, pouring and tumult of
Winds splitting into streets of damp shelters.
The building of white darkness stands afore.
The anxious hands closed in hands in a wait
Watches clouds and rains and cries down his cheeks.
Ticking I.C.U. beyond a bad dream.
Smells of nursing cannot wipe flavors of
Disillusion, awake nights and old sweats.
The choking fire of sleep burns the eyelids.
Love is watching love solving the question
Of to be or not to be. Rain wet windows…

clever talks delay friendship!

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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
1 posted 2008-05-13 06:15 PM


quote:
Love is watching love solving the question
Of to be or not to be. Rain wet windows…



Incredibly powerful, dear Ku!

Even in the greatest human tragedies, love finds a way to express itself and bring comfort ...

Love,
Margherita

Midnitesun
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Gaia
2 posted 2008-05-13 09:31 PM


You capture a human drama as it unfolds, with the discerning eye of a portrait photographer, and the empathetic heart of a born nurturer.
Thank you, again, for sharing.

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