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the courier
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the courier |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
winter’s chill without the cold bereft of soul’s soft spray as darkness lights its way through weakened words untold of wisdom wafted, knowledge known begets its children yet unborn and separates forsaken from forlorn unseating authority from off its throne beguiling the unrepentant soothing the unforgiven dispatching the message of hope by the courier of regret |
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Larrysmom Senior Member
since 2008-04-03
Posts 533Florida, USA |
Wow!!! This is amazing… the sound of it is beautiful yet sad. Tammy<333 |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Now...that's what I'm talkin' about! Nice write  |
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Seoulair Senior Member
since 2008-03-27
Posts 807Seoul S.Korea |
very well written. love this one. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I like it! Ida |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful flow...James |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
Thank you Larrysmom for your kind comments, TD thanks for your generous (more than generous actually) observations, thanks Seoulair for reading and leaving your nice note, Ida & James—appreciate your taking the time to read and comment. |
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