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Volcano |
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ilsm Member
since 2008-04-13
Posts 61UK |
When thunderous roars that shake the ground Hurl rocks out from the fires of hell, And through the air with mighty force Until they crash upon the earth And shatter all below; When molten lava from mountainside Erupts and spews across the land Like glowing streams of blood, While flames of glowing orange Lick the sky, and choking smoke Whirls round in clouds of burning dust - Then offer up a red bull-calf: Placate this god of fire. |
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Seoulair Senior Member
since 2008-03-27
Posts 807Seoul S.Korea |
good eruption. enjoyed. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Good eruption for me too...Enjoyed the words and images ... yann |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Powerful imagery but I say "Forget the calf and run." Ida |
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ilsm Member
since 2008-04-13
Posts 61UK |
Thanks every-one. Marchmadness: You can't beat a nice bit of roast beef! |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
very Descriptive Write! ARCTIC WIND |
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shyvl Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531texas, usa |
Very strong and powerful imagery used in your verse. I enjoyed it very much but am happy to read about and not experience it first hand sharyn |
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