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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2008-04-21 06:05 AM


it was a accidental unraveling
that wood floor easy slip down
like boot cuts moving gravel
with the heals off music

you spoke of your art with buttons
how you collect them in your mind
and shuffle them like poker chips
between your fingers when hungry

and lately you have been more
than the occasional ravenous
for something non vegetarian
and some sipping whiskey too

something about the thunder you say
always makes you love being 40
and wearing those storms again
hoping this one is worse than  before

and that worse is going to be lovely
___________

daark

[This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (04-21-2008 10:01 AM).]

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Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2008-04-21 07:23 AM


Smiling broadly at how you play with words, dear D.!

Simply awesome ... the places you take us!!

and that worse is going to be lovely

Love,
Margherita

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
2 posted 2008-04-21 08:56 AM


something about being 50
when those storms ravage
your weathered bones
then that hot flash
that follows
now thats a rush!!!!!!!!

pass me some jack daniels

and a big sausage to go

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
3 posted 2008-04-21 09:42 AM


LOL at Ms Inky's comments!   lovely work here Mr Daark... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
4 posted 2008-04-21 02:57 PM


Dark Stranger,

I'm more than with you on the sipping whiskey.

Nice one.

Bobby

Larrysmom
Senior Member
since 2008-04-03
Posts 533
Florida, USA
5 posted 2008-04-21 08:16 PM


Beautiful Mr. Daark…

Tammy<333

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
6 posted 2008-04-21 10:31 PM


ms mar, thanks lady friend..you smile me


________

ms inky, you serve me up a genuine grin each time you read me, thanks babe


________________

ms r&b thanks lady for the touch here


___________________

bobbyj, thanks for friend for sipping along on this one

_______________

larrysmomtam  thank you lady friend for the read and comments

Seoulair
Senior Member
since 2008-03-27
Posts 807
Seoul S.Korea
7 posted 2008-04-22 04:13 PM


beautiful. enjoyed.
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