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xTr3m3sT
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since 2008-03-03
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0 posted 2008-04-20 09:54 AM


Her very beautiful hair,
and her undeniable touch
leaves me without care
and love flows through my veins with a rush.

Her voice echo's in my ear,
her body resembles a goddess
she is the person I hold dear
and no, I am not being modest.

When I talk,
to her sometimes
I feel like I'm walking
on the clouds of time
and nothing is in
my unseen path
untouched by sin
and we both sit, and laugh.

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2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
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by the sea
1 posted 2008-04-20 10:37 AM


very touching indeed...Love is not about modesty I think...

  Thanks  

   yann

Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
2 posted 2008-04-20 07:26 PM


Angel,

This is a very nice poem.  Say hello to Sarah.

Bobby

Larrysmom
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since 2008-04-03
Posts 533
Florida, USA
3 posted 2008-04-20 07:33 PM


This is a very beautiful poem Angel...

Tammy<333

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2008-04-21 12:40 PM


Enjoyed...James
xTr3m3sT
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5 posted 2008-04-21 11:16 AM


Thank you for the positive feedback :]

Sarah is coming over my house today ^.^

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