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Just a feeling...
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Just a feeling... |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia 
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your words smile me so often that I wonder it they’re real or if you have a storeroom filled to overflowing and perhaps you just bring them out to impress a proper girl with rings on but still they find me and still they smile me that I’ve come to look for them daily that feeling alone brings a smile.. Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Yes, dear Roniece, there are some bringers of smiles that have such a positive influence on us. They are much much more than a daily dose of chocolate ... This is a very lovely expression of your heart. Love and hugs. Margherita  |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
thank you my lovely Margherita! I like your choice of words... a bringer of smiles.. he does indeed! but I will still keep my chocolate as a back up! love RDBBe kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
hehe, me too!!!  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms r&b...would the rings get caught in his armor? enjoyed this side of you |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Love the way you wrote this.....Yes, I know it happens, happens to all of us....we all have someone who makes us smile..even just as a friend. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hello Roniece this is such a wonder...Keep on writing my dear, I will always read you... yann |
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Larrysmom Senior Member
since 2008-04-03
Posts 533Florida, USA |
Roniece, Your poetry blows me away… And this one is no exception. Tammy<333 |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Dear RDB, A person should always look for things that make them smile. That's a good thing to do. Bobby |
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Seoulair Senior Member
since 2008-03-27
Posts 807Seoul S.Korea |
absolutely soft and beautiful. Just a feeling will bright a moment. love the read. |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Anyone who writes poetry would love to have this said about them. To have someone waiting for your words to bring a smile is about the greatest tribute one can hope for....and you say it beautifully |
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shyvl Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531texas, usa |
What a fabulous compliment- "your words smile me so often that I wonder it they’re real" Your words often have the same effect. Thanks for sharing sharyn |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Lovely, Roniece, and as I'm late with the reading can only ditto the other comments. Helen |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
That is a lovely post Roniece and please keep up that smile. Lindsay |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
smiles do have that air of magic pressed softly between two people .... keep a smile! : ) Ct |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
smiling with you* |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Dear Roniece, I know this kind of smile, too. Yes, there are smile makers out there that brighten our days, thank goodness! Love your new pic, too!! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
My dear RDB, YOUR smile, never fails to smile me!  Love 'n smiles across the miles, Linda  |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
RDB...I like you also wait in anticipation for the next poem from certain poets. Great poem. I think waiting is half the reward...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
to quote a friend, "your words smile me so often" Hugs! R |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
every line of this one seems to be leaping out to be quoted above the next...impossible...they are all equally excellent...very well done... |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Lovely new picture Roniece to go with this very nice little poem. Ida |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed the Write !! ARCTIC WIND |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
thank you everyone... I really appreciate you reading and commenting on my work.. you all bring such a nice smile to my day... love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Joe Crow Member
since 2007-12-18
Posts 66Indiana |
Roniece, That's a great little poem! Wonder and mystery always draws my attention, who is he, where is he? I look forward to reading more from you and I get the feeling you will pour it out when the time comes. In my book I know the 'him' all too well, it's the 'her' my heart cries out to.... Thanks for making me smile!!! Joe |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Thanks Joe.. smiles from you are always a pleasure to see... love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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