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Open Poetry #42

litter from a vacation

poddarku
Senior Member

since 2008-01-15

Posts 589
india

0 posted 2008-04-20 05:10 AM

Litter from a vacation
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He succumbs to darkness descending at distance.
Hourglass is soon to be upturned once again.
The sensors open themselves to the vacation.
The sound of furious water of the fall is
Near. The travel guidebook, dog-eared, is being
Eaten by moss. The village lass. A sheaf of corns.
He returns to sky and dwell on a sun like a
Thawing softy. Rings of a defective cycle
Make him turn to this earth, green and golden. Sounds
Of treasures fills his soul and still he is to be
Wiped out from this landscape of calm infinity.
Only leftover from his bad habits ‘ll litter.

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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

1 posted 2008-04-20 05:21 AM

Ku... your thoughts are very beautifully expressed... I do so enjoy your writings... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2008-04-20 06:19 AM

quote:
He returns to sky and dwells on a sun like a
thawing softy. Rings of a defective cycle
make him turn to this earth, green and golden. Sounds
of treasures fill his soul and still he is to be
wiped out from this landscape of calm infinity.

Exceptional poetic language, dear Ku!! I recognize these emotions as my own, so powerfully you expressed them.

Great work!

Love and hugs.
Margherita

Seoulair
Senior Member

since 2008-03-27

Posts 807
Seoul S.Korea

3 posted 2008-04-20 02:08 PM

beautiful poem. read many times and enjoyed. Since you posted in CA I'll post my question there.

Always good poem, my friend.

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