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Breath of Dawn
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Breath of Dawn |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! 
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Breath of Dawn Just beyond the fine-scented moonbeams' final flight, when twilight and Spring are yet so very young, a worn and weary poet-heart seems suddenly new, when touched by the first sweet breath of dawn, and the balm of fresh willows whispering in the early morning mist. ---b. e. adams (4/19/08) |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
smiles... ah Bruce, you always know how to smile my mornings.. thank you for the beautiful gifting on my day... love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
That warm willow 'balm' is a welcome change after months of chilly mornings! |
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shyvl Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531texas, usa |
To read your verse is to travel new places in delight. Especially loved "Just beyond the fine-scented moonbeams' final flight," That grabbed me. Thanks for sharing sharyn |
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Seoulair Senior Member
since 2008-03-27
Posts 807Seoul S.Korea |
very beautiful and touching.  |
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Larrysmom Senior Member
since 2008-04-03
Posts 533Florida, USA |
You are always taking me somewhere I have never been and it’s always such an incredibly beautiful place… Tammy<333 |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
the balm of fresh willows whispering in the early morning mist as always wonderful... Thank you yann |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Bruce, a wonderful gift of your pen which has been enchanted by dawn's whispers of love and beauty. Delightful!! Love, Margherita |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Just beyond the fine-scented moonbeams' final flight, when twilight and Spring....................." Just lovely and very descriptive! ARCTIC WIND |
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ArtSolstice Member
since 2007-03-18
Posts 498 |
Your poetry so often reminds me of the Chinese proverb, "The miracle is not to fly in the air, or to walk on water, but to walk on the earth." You so often remind us that the earth is sacred. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
This does wonderful things for this worn and weary poet heart too, Bruce. Ida |
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WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
This is awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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