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hiddensmiles
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since 2008-02-07
Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

0 posted 2008-04-19 02:11 PM


The trees are bare,
with out their leaves.
Like a human body
with out any hair.

It is cold out side,
but getting warmer
with each
loving day.

The sun light lasts
a little longer,
than the passed
winter days.

The birds just
flew back
and are singing
very lovely.

All of this is
because spring is
coming soon...


JJ

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Larrysmom
Senior Member
since 2008-04-03
Posts 533
Florida, USA
1 posted 2008-04-19 02:30 PM


Your poem makes me anxious for it to get here.

Tammy<333

Seoulair
Senior Member
since 2008-03-27
Posts 807
Seoul S.Korea
2 posted 2008-04-19 04:02 PM


yes. Spring is here. Nice poem.
Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
3 posted 2008-04-19 04:02 PM


Love Spring too!



ARCTIC WIND

2islander2
Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
4 posted 2008-04-19 04:04 PM


Hi thanks to introduce spring in a very lovely way...

  yann

shyvl
Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531
texas, usa
5 posted 2008-04-19 11:43 PM


enjoyed as well.  Pleasure reading
sharyn

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
6 posted 2008-04-21 12:51 PM


Nice way to put it...James
hiddensmiles
Senior Member
since 2008-02-07
Posts 514
at the beach... i wish
7 posted 2008-04-28 12:03 PM


thank you

JJ

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