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2islander2
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0 posted 2008-04-19 11:42 AM


Where do you go ?
Clouds
stop to cry
for never reaching
the wind.

stop to seek
the dreams
of the trees.

© Copyright 2008 yann rolland - All Rights Reserved
xTr3m3sT
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1 posted 2008-04-19 11:43 AM


>.> I don't get it :[
Seoulair
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2 posted 2008-04-19 11:51 AM


wonderful. Very philosophical. very nice.

(and it is nice to talk to clouds like this )


Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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3 posted 2008-04-19 09:37 PM


oh I love this Yann...     love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

shyvl
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4 posted 2008-04-19 11:20 PM


What a wonderful use of language so expressive and yet simplistic.  Thank you for sharing
sharyn

2islander2
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5 posted 2008-04-20 01:46 AM


thank you Roniece and Sharyn for your kind comments, it's nice to hear about you.

  yann

2islander2
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6 posted 2008-04-20 01:55 AM


thank you seoul and x3 tr3

   yann

Margherita
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7 posted 2008-04-20 07:00 AM


I love it!! I could spend the whole day lieing in the grass and just watching the clouds pass by, letting my thoughts drift along ... oh, and the feeling they convey when we fly above them! I imagine to jump into their softness ...

Thank you for this, dear Yann!

This is a keeper for me!


Love and cloud hugs.
Margherita




2islander2
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8 posted 2008-04-20 08:11 AM


whith such a comment, I will spend a nice day too....I love also cumulo nimbus wandering in a blue sky during spring or summer...

Thank you Margherita

  hugs

  yann

rad802
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9 posted 2008-04-20 09:28 AM


The thing that makes the Gettysburg address so impressive is the fact that Lincoln says so much in so few words.

Nice work

Rick Delmonico

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10 posted 2008-04-20 09:31 AM


The Words all together make such a poetic story told. I really enjoyed this wonderful poetic dream like write!



ARCTIC WIND

2islander2
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11 posted 2008-04-20 10:19 AM


Thank you rick, thank you AW i'm sincerily touched by your supporting comments...

  have a nice day


   yann

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