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rad802
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0 posted 2008-04-19 10:25 AM



Stand entwined in summer sun, sand against the sea.
I lean upon imaginings, pretend I'm free.
Masked within expressive forms, a mood becomes a need.
I smile upon a lovely child, her soul to feed.

And the mystery of life reveals from somewhere far away,
a hint of the sublime enfolded in this new foray.

Held within a pleasant stare, a memory freezes time.
I drift into serene release, impressions kind.
Masked within expressive forms, an urge becomes a deed.
I laugh aloud to see myself as yet unfreed.

And the mystery of life repeats from somewhere far away.
It reaches in and floods my mind in gentle interplay.

A vision stirred in thoughts of you. It was a precious hope to see.
Before my eyes was someone new who mirrored you and me.

Set adrift on summer breeze, our love becomes a soul.
Surpassing all that I alone could hope to hold.
Masked within expressive forms, a step becomes a dance.
Rekindling my poor spirit's fire with romance.

And the mystery of life repeats, for us a vast array
of reasons to renew our love with every day.


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xTr3m3sT
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1 posted 2008-04-19 10:28 AM


Welcome to Pip, Excellent poem ;]
Sunshine
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2 posted 2008-04-19 10:31 AM


A fine repetition of how one
frees one's self.

Welcome to Passions!

Please check your email for a Very Special Greeting!

" It matters not this distance now  " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
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KRJ

Seoulair
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since 2008-03-27
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3 posted 2008-04-19 11:10 AM


wonderful write. Enjoyed.

A war welcome to this wonderful  pip land.

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
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by the sea
4 posted 2008-04-19 11:16 AM


a mood becomes a need
an urge becomes a deed
a step becomes a dance
our love becomes a soul

Hello rad802, i found a poem inside your poem, very good work

  yann

icebox
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in the shadows
5 posted 2008-04-20 11:59 AM



The meaning of life is simple, but its mysteries are legion.

Welcome to PiP!


Margherita
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Eternity
6 posted 2008-04-20 04:44 PM


Welcome to Pip!
I enjoyed your first entry very much.

Love,
Margherita

Larrysmom
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since 2008-04-03
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7 posted 2008-04-20 05:52 PM


Welcome to PIP!

Beautiful poetry you have written…

Tammy<333

shyvl
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since 2008-04-11
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texas, usa
8 posted 2008-04-20 08:19 PM


Lovely work-Welcome to Pip.
sharyn

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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Sydney, Australia
9 posted 2008-04-20 08:30 PM


Welcome to our pages blue.. this was a lovely first offering.. hope to read more of your work... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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