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Joe Crow Member
since 2007-12-18
Posts 66Indiana |
Clouds The clouds roll by like a great army above shapeless shapes of mist and vapor, commanded by the unseen like little soldiers they obey without question silently moving along across the sky some seem happy, some seem sad sometimes they make peace, sometimes war sometimes they're not there at all vanquished into another form sometimes the sky darkens the thunder rolls the lightning flashes with applause from heaven the show begins like unseasoned tears the raindrops fall to water the garden below and the purpose of clouds is known... Joe Crow |
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Seoulair Senior Member
since 2008-03-27
Posts 807Seoul S.Korea |
enjoyed the read. nice. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
and the purpose of clouds is known... well said Joe... I love looking up at clouds..  love RDB |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Something mysterious about clouds, even though they are pure white, they are thick, without containment , roaming where they please, whatever form they wish to be...I envy the clouds..floating free on the wind... ~ARH  You know you're in love, when you can't fall asleep,because reality is finally better than your dream~Dr.Seuss |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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shyvl Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531texas, usa |
I especially enjoyed the words used to create this imagery "with applause from heaven the show begins like unseasoned tears the raindrops fall to water the garden below" Pleasure to read, thanks for sharing sharyn |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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gilead Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067nevada, USA |
How oft' have I dreamed in the motion of clouds! This one moves me! Art |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: That's exactly what is happening here right now while I am writing this reply! I LOVE clouds and your poem is very nice indeed. Love, Margherita |
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shaggy New Member
since 2008-04-17
Posts 9 |
I love how your descriptions make the clouds seem alive. Great read! |
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Larrysmom Senior Member
since 2008-04-03
Posts 533Florida, USA |
I search deep within the clouds now… This is beautiful. Thank you for sharing it. Tammy<333 |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hello, Joe. From one cloud-gazer to another, I applaud your engaging poem! Much can be gathered from a gathering of clouds!  Keep looking up! ~ and writing!  Linda |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
so well written and interesting, thanks yann |
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