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Open Poetry #42

Nobody moves on

Walter Poe
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 787

0 posted 2008-04-18 05:33 AM

I walked
I ran

I walked
I ran

Yet i am still here

Aren't I?

I am still here
Tell me I'm still here

Or am I falling?

Are you with me?

Can you be with me if i'm not here?

I'm so confused

Am I alone surrounded by a million voices?

Or am I a thing trying to be a one?

I walked
I ran

I walked
I ran

Yet I am still here

Aren't I?

To take a lot of pain,
take a lot of pain
Love is like a cloud,
holds a lot of rain

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

1 posted 2008-04-18 06:47 AM

yes, I think you are still here... I enjoyed your thoughts here Paul... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2008-04-18 01:20 PM

Walter~
You ARE still here ... and this is reflectively gorgeous~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

Seoulair
Senior Member

since 2008-03-27

Posts 807
Seoul S.Korea

3 posted 2008-04-18 03:53 PM

Nice. enjoyed.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2008-04-18 05:08 PM

love this!

shyvl
Senior Member

since 2008-04-11

Posts 531
texas, usa

5 posted 2008-04-18 07:39 PM

excellent verse. I truly enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing.
shryn

Larrysmom
Senior Member

since 2008-04-03

Posts 533
Florida, USA

6 posted 2008-04-19 03:00 PM

This is incredibly close to how I feel somtimes...

Amazing.

Tammy<333

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