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I Walk A Whispered Wind
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I Walk A Whispered Wind |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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I walk a whispered wind where Spirits of the past traverse Calling out to me to seek the wisdoms of the universe~ I chase a rustling wind for fear of not having seen what it is that the Spirit's would have me glean~ I seek a calming wind that sits me down in soft surround Gifting me with the knowing that where I am, is exactly where the whispered wind would find my thoughts going~ I walk I chase I seek I sit I am found~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very clever formatting! love this!  |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Amazing how the spirits sing to us when we need them most. We must never forget to listen and learn. |
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Seoulair Senior Member
since 2008-03-27
Posts 807Seoul S.Korea |
beautiful and soft as wind. love the read. |
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gilead Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067nevada, USA |
What a marvelous poem! The ascending progression of thought lends itself to the very uplifting power of a spiritual wind, and the reader can feel its calming presence . . . |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Thanks you four~ AND actually, Seoulair, you inspired me to listen for this one with the reply you left on my 'Find Me ... Find Me' piece~ quote: I thank YOU~  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ Email - noles1@totcon.com |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Oh Margie...you knew that this one would touch my heart..... Lovely....  |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
a such delightful rerading. thanks Marge yann |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Marge...Great write, enjoyed...Paul Sometime the winds might blow all our thoughts astray Then each passing thought returns to us another day Winds of time fan the flames keeping our hearts a glow Brush the souls of our forefathers return to us our dreams from where they flow ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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Betty Senior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 1159Virginia |
This is great Marge |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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shyvl Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531texas, usa |
I loved the repetion and consistency they bound the peice together. It was lovely to read and read again and again. Thanks for sharing sharyn |
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Beasley Senior Member
since 2003-11-28
Posts 682Cheboygan,MI USA |
This is so peaceful. Very nice writing. love, Barb |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Thank you ALL so much~ And Paul ? quote:That is as lovely as inspired write as I've seen ... thank you so very, very much~ *Huglets* to all~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: There is such an aura of mystery about this poem, it is really intriguing! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
A lovely lovely poem Marge, Enjoyed by all, keep up the good work. Love to you dear lady and God Bless. Lindsay |
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Larrysmom Senior Member
since 2008-04-03
Posts 533Florida, USA |
Betty Lou is right, there is mystery to this and it’s beautiful… Tammy<333 |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ah, BettyLou ... you know my whispers well~ Thanks to all of you~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ Email - noles1@totcon.com |
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HairDark New Member
since 2008-04-18
Posts 1 |
I have followed Margie Tidwell's poetry for some time. This poem as with all of her others flows ever so gently. I am new here and look forward to reading more poetry from the hearts of others. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
KATHERINE~ How WONDERFUL to see you here ... can't wait to see some of your BEAUTIFUL poetry here~ WELCOME~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Beauty in words Marge! ARCTIC WIND |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Marge, when you listen to the wind's whispers you are truly aligned to heaven's desires. This is YOU. Beautiful and inspiring!! Love, Margherita  |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Gentle, lovely poem, I enjoyed it very much. Ida |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
You ALl are so kind to this ~Poet~ Thank you~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Marge, This is a real keeper and touches me deeply. Lovely ~ just lovely. Alison |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Alison~ Thank you so very much~ This is the ink of my heart in whisper~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Inspired-8 Member
since 2008-04-14
Posts 311Pluto |
Profound lovely write my friend: ) |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
Marge, this is just beautiful.You have always had a way with words. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Dearest Marge, I knew I would find a poem that fits the situation now. May your whisperd wind bring with it the good health we are all wishing for you and whisper our prayers in your ears. Love, Joyce |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
you always speak straight to the heart...beautiful!!! Hugs, R |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Marge, your poetic voice is that of a whispered wind...  May the Force always be with you. Love you! Earthy One  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Yes! May "the soft surround" heal you quickly, dear Marge! Love and hugs. Margherita |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
a most fine 'penning!' As a 'Universalist,' I am particularly fond of: " I walk a whispered wind where Spirits of the past traverse Calling out to me to seek the wisdoms of the universe~" sustained applause! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
I seek a calming wind that sits me down in soft surround Oh dearest friends, thanks to all who I neglected to thank for the kindness of your thoughts and prayers~ I'll be blown by the winds that move me to a place of calm in total surround~ I wait ... I seek ... I've only to speak His name to know that He is with me~ Oh dear Spirit of the Wind ... let it be now~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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