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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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the boredom of being good when looking at your eyes and those lips with easy on wondering if the taste of you is more like heaven would be than just the look of you in the glass of lovely slowly stirring with no hands and then you smile kinda just a zoy whiskey grin kind and I wonder if you kept my secret and did you read it again and look beyond my eye windows ______________ daark |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
always an interesting view for first thing in the morning  M |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Reading you D, brings such smiles.  |
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shyvl Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531texas, usa |
Your way of expression simple encounters has such a sensual flow and an intimacy to convey. I always enjoy reading and wishing to be there. sharyn |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms MMs, thanks babe for the read and reply _______________ ms GS, thanks hon for looking in this one _________________ ms shyvl, would imagine your being there would add it's own poetry, thanks ms |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
I liked what I read here Mr Daark... I did indeed  love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The last five lines are the keeper lines the one where every love nods and says yes... But then, that's just me. Of course she would. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms r&b, thank you lady for the touch ________________ ms sun, thank you for touching those lines with your smile sides |
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justanoseypoetryreader New Member
since 2008-04-18
Posts 1ohio |
i kinda smiled when i read this. as i've kinda smiled with most every word i've seen you write. Bravo! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi, Dark one.....still making magic with words, I see. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
justa'...thanks my friend, am always pleased to get a smile...welcome to the blue pages of PIP ___________ ms martie, thanks little neighbor...slow hugs to you babe |
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Seoulair Senior Member
since 2008-03-27
Posts 807Seoul S.Korea |
very good. I could picture it through your eyes. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
friend soeulair, thanks so much |
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