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Open Poetry #42

An Epic Passing

Clang
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since 2005-12-15

Posts 222

0 posted 2008-04-16 05:13 PM

A fleeting fireside memory
Of mourning moment's view
A secret chalice filled
Lost days at Veedavoo

Never knew I went there
Never knew the strain
Of empty acrid sadness
The endless ache of pain

A haven in my memory
The beginning of alone
Smoke, a sleepy tendril
The stars above me shone

How could I be so stupid
Why must I be so brash
The embers glowed 'til daylight
My future turned to ash

I always take it with me
Bent over like Boo Boo
A night for Mr. Ranger
Those smells of Veedavoo

Quirks make us interesting!

Inspired-8
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since 2008-04-14

Posts 311
Pluto

1 posted 2008-04-17 02:51 PM

Nice write smooth flow and imagery.

Inspired-8

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