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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2008-04-16 05:55 AM



I would always wonder about the buckhorn
and did the clientele prefer you
on short skirt saturdays
when your eyes were wet woman music

or one those night time get aways
when there was something sinful there
in the depth of your laughter
and in your handfuls of undoing

they are the ghost voices now
when we pass their window stones slowly
and show them our smile teeth
when we look back at them looking back

from the front seat secrets of volvos
and booths in the corner bedroom
by a jukebox with strangers touching
and wishing they were reaching under

the gypsy hair smother of another's afternoon
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daark

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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
1 posted 2008-04-16 06:03 AM


oooh this feels like you are in a reflective mood Mr Daark.. enjoyed your view... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
2 posted 2008-04-16 06:07 AM


ms r&b...just passing by a window that I often pass by...in my mind..thanks ms
Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
3 posted 2008-04-16 09:31 AM


Dear D., the incredible things you discover behind those windows, letting your pen draw pictures for us to enjoy! ... and planting the wish for more to know and to savor.

" ... when we look back at them looking back"

You write poems that become events.

Love,
Margherita

shyvl
Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531
texas, usa
4 posted 2008-04-16 11:02 AM


Your poetry always intriques me enticing me to know more.
sharyn

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
5 posted 2008-04-17 05:55 AM


ms mar, thanks hon for the touch


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ms shyvl, thanks lady friend for the read

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