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SkaaDee Member
since 2008-04-07
Posts 116Canada |
modern skies panic holds still, blood in stone from faces buried long ago - the coliseum yet stands in Rome. affectionate Sun today still shines, steadfast light toward kinder minds in loathing, anger and fear. Modern skies are clear. should have buried long ago with runners' dreams and lion bones. momento of what man became the mausoleum stands in shame. [This message has been edited by SkaaDee (04-16-2008 01:08 AM).] |
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Seoulair Senior Member
since 2008-03-27
Posts 807Seoul S.Korea |
beautiful. I like this poem. If sky had eyes, it would have cried to blind. |
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shyvl Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531texas, usa |
"affectionate Sun today still shines, steadfast light toward kinder minds" I hope we have become kinder and not just substituted forms of cruelty. Very moving verse. I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing sharyn |
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NeonKnight Junior Member
since 2008-04-12
Posts 36New South Wales, Australia |
this is a really nice poem, there are some great images. And there is some emotion that flows with these words, i can feel it. |
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