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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2008-04-15 05:54 PM

We Shall Touch Again

Five in the morning
seems empty & lonely
without my darling
by my side.

I would love to
live forever with you
but I count the days
without you.

I'm yearning for the
joy of the day
and the sensuality
of the nights
when we shall
touch again.

JamesLee
15April
2008

shyvl
Senior Member

since 2008-04-11

Posts 531
texas, usa

1 posted 2008-04-15 05:56 PM

You express your emotions with such tenderness and beauty. Thank you for the pleasure
sharyn

Seoulair
Senior Member

since 2008-03-27

Posts 807
Seoul S.Korea

2 posted 2008-04-15 06:54 PM

ah, you should re-draw the map...to move the two states together.

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

3 posted 2008-04-15 09:58 PM

I'm really liking your writing these days, James....enjoyed this one too.

j.

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

4 posted 2008-04-15 10:13 PM

ah just lovely James! love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2008-04-16 04:46 AM

Thank you shyvl, Seoulair, jwesley and Roniece for the wonderful responses...
Seoulair if that were possible I would do it...but until then I will practice patience...James

gilead
Senior Member

since 2008-03-10

Posts 1067
nevada, USA

6 posted 2008-04-16 12:46 PM

Ah, how wondrous a love that transcends all distance! So beautifully expressed!

Art

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

7 posted 2008-04-16 01:06 PM

thank you for sharing, i hope you will see her soon...

yann

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2008-04-16 04:30 PM

Thank you gilead and 2islander2 for the wonderful responses...
2islander2 I believe its going to happen in May, and May is not so far away...James

LindsayP
Member Elite

since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

9 posted 2008-04-17 10:23 PM

Very romantic James, much enjoyed

Lindsay

Larrysmom
Senior Member

since 2008-04-03

Posts 533
Florida, USA

10 posted 2008-04-17 11:05 PM

Soft, sensual, and oh so lovingly romantic… Beautiful.

Tammy<333

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

11 posted 2008-04-18 12:01 PM

Nice write...though I've been away for a little while...good to see you still here and posting strongly...enjoyed greatly...

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

12 posted 2008-04-18 05:45 AM

thank you Lindsay, Larrysmom and steavenr for the wonderful responses...James

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

13 posted 2008-04-18 05:59 AM

James, another beauty from your pen. Lovely writing.

LittleDevil
Junior Member

since 2008-04-01

Posts 34
Hawaii, USA (OAHU)

14 posted 2008-04-18 03:16 PM

well done indeed! it reminded me of the days i spent counting how long my ex and i were seperated. almost made me cry. thanks very much for sharing this poem. i hope that one day i will feel like this about some one again.

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

15 posted 2008-04-18 03:47 PM

Yo James,

This is a nice poem, with an interesting shape.

Keep up the good writing.

Bobby

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

16 posted 2008-04-18 06:21 PM

simple, fine, 'slice of real life' Romanticism!

applause!!

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