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Misty Lilacs
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White Birch Forest

0 posted 2008-04-15 02:27 PM



     

spring

sun shining brightly
spring has finally arrived
children on playground

[This message has been edited by Misty Lilacs (04-15-2008 03:47 PM).]

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Robert Frazier
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1 posted 2008-04-15 02:29 PM


Ah!  A voice for the beauty of spring!
Perfect!

Robert

shyvl
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since 2008-04-11
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texas, usa
2 posted 2008-04-15 03:16 PM


lovely use of language.
"sun shining brightly
having no alternative"  Your choice of words was cunning.  Thanks for the pleasure.
sharyn

Misty Lilacs
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White Birch Forest
3 posted 2008-04-15 03:39 PM


Robert, thank you for your kind words.
Marti

Misty Lilacs
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White Birch Forest
4 posted 2008-04-15 03:40 PM


sharyn, Your words make me blush. Thank you so much.
Marti

Seoulair
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since 2008-03-27
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Seoul S.Korea
5 posted 2008-04-15 03:46 PM


Love your poem. The picture is beautiful too....brought lots, lots of memories to me. It made my heart warm.  
jwesley
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Spring, Texas
6 posted 2008-04-15 08:16 PM


Wonderful...the picture too! Where was it taken...?

Jimmy

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