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Haiku poetry |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State 
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until time takes me into Never-Never land I shall remember the one of a kind delicous thumb print cookie dimple in your chin shared ice-cream sodas two sets of brown eyes gazing melting with each bite. green grasses cover your long years ago dug grave I still remember Joyce 4/14, 08 |
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shyvl Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531texas, usa |
A fitting tribute to one you loved. Thanks for sharing, is this truly haiku structure--I am not well versed in form and would like to know. sharyn |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
It's one type of Haiku. 5 seven 5 syllable lines. No title very little punctuation. One type is about nature only. I maybe fudged a little. Love, Joyce |
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shyvl Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531texas, usa |
Thank you joyce- I feel better versed(ha ha) sharyn |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The innocent love of this is a wonderful tribute to all that can be, Joyce. Thank you so much for sharing! |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I found this lovely and touching, Joyce. Ida |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Joyce~ You are beautifully well-versed~ I love the softness of this~  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
Beautiful!! Hugs, Robert |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Joyce, these love-filled verses touch my heart. Really beautiful and tender! Love, Margherita  |
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r v wooo Senior Member
since 2007-08-07
Posts 656 |
enjoyed the haiku, joyce but am finding #42 to be very fast paced. |
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Mountain Goat Junior Member
since 2008-04-06
Posts 32High Places |
That's lovely |
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gilead Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067nevada, USA |
A subtle, quiet elegance that tugs at the heart. Art |
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