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xTr3m3sT
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0 posted 2008-04-14 03:30 PM


What are friends?

Friends are people who you think are you friends,
They get close enough so you can call them a brother or a sister,
Then they knock you down to the damn ground.

What is life?

Life is a hidden portal through the stronghold of challenge.
Waiting for you to enter so it can throw any obstacle in your path,
Hoping that you fall flat on your face.

Hope...

What is hope?
I don't know what this word means,
Is it something nice?

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Seoulair
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since 2008-03-27
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Seoul S.Korea
1 posted 2008-04-14 03:47 PM


Friend, life and hope....
Find the true friend who is like a cane.
live true life when you contend with yourself.
Hope is nice when you hope nicely.

A good thinking poem in a very, I mean, very negative tune.

A confused mind is well expressed.


xTr3m3sT
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2 posted 2008-04-14 03:52 PM


At the moment I am in a positive tune, but my poetic soul is still inclined to the negative atmosphere I've been around. Soon I will have positive and warm poems, but for now most of my poetry will be cold, because my poetic soul is cold.

-Angel.

shyvl
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since 2008-04-11
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texas, usa
3 posted 2008-04-14 04:03 PM


Freinds are rare and life's a challenge but both a challenge we must accept to be fulfilled.-I think.  Thank you for sharing. I like the way you structured this piece.
sharyn

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