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Open Poetry #42

Air

Inspired-8
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since 2008-04-14

Posts 311
Pluto

0 posted 2008-04-14 03:08 PM

Breathe deep
Consume its air
Tangible meanings
Already there
Just for a moment
Only so long
Ever deviant
Suddenly gone...

Copyright 2008 © Victor Duna. All rights reserved.

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Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2008-04-14 03:38 PM

You left just enough of a gust for me
to recall something beautiful...

and that is the gift of a poet.

Welcome to Passions! Please,
check your Email for a Very Special Greeting!

" It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

Seoulair
Senior Member

since 2008-03-27

Posts 807
Seoul S.Korea

2 posted 2008-04-14 03:38 PM

interesting moment in life. nice poem.
A warm welcome to this wonderful land.

shyvl
Senior Member

since 2008-04-11

Posts 531
texas, usa

3 posted 2008-04-14 04:08 PM

beautifully intriqing. It gave me something to comtemplate about the value of each moment. Welcom and thanks for sharing

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

4 posted 2008-04-19 03:09 AM

oh no, I haven't welcomed you yet and already you have left a lovely comment on one of my poems... thank you... and a warm welcome to our pages blue... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Inspired-8
Member

since 2008-04-14

Posts 311
Pluto

5 posted 2008-04-19 03:27 AM

Thanks all no sweat there are alot of newbies to welcome thanks for reading and commenting on my poem!
cheers!

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