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Of the Forbidden |
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gilead Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067nevada, USA 
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The door I dared to open, the room I dared to enter, it was not as they had told me. It had windows filled with light, and I closed the door behind me, unafraid. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Arthur~ This is g o o d ! ~When shadows seep down the wall ... they simply cease to be when into the light they fall~ The fears dispelled by the light ..~  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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gilead Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067nevada, USA |
A perfect companion to my little poem! I assume it is your own excellent work? Thanks,Art |
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sewasham Senior Member
since 2006-09-11
Posts 714Oklahoma, USA |
I enjoyed this Art. We should never be afraid to enter those rooms. Many hold unexpected pleasant surprises. Nice work. Take care and Have fun. Steve |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I guess I like things simple and clean, Art. I think this is one of your best yet. Says it all. Ida |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Yes, it is mine ... just fell to the page as I read yours~ I like 'inspire' when it comes so easily~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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gilead Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067nevada, USA |
What a marvelous gift you have Marge! Sometimes the spontaneous is best! Art |
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shyvl Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531texas, usa |
What an excellent write. We all sometimes face fear to find the light. Enjoyed sharyn |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Art, This is an excellent hopeful poem. Of course, we all know, that's the way it always is. I like this poem a lot. Bobby |
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Seoulair Senior Member
since 2008-03-27
Posts 807Seoul S.Korea |
It is indeed very good. A wish, a hope and a reality. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice..James |
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