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TinaTrivett Senior Member
since 2006-07-15
Posts 569
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Depression never leaves Always clinging to your last drops of good spirit Your last bits of happiness Turning your own world against you Tearing your life from your grip Just when you think you have it beat It beats you |
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Inspired-8 Member
since 2008-04-14
Posts 311Pluto |
Love your style the flow and imagery are vivid keep writing it helps me with my depression! hugs vic Depression My companion Forty some odd years Blackened my future Tenacious gripped fear Learn as I mature Depression is manageable When I choose to take care Of my thoughts and actions With my meds friends and a prayer.. Inspired-8 |
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Seoulair Senior Member
since 2008-03-27
Posts 807Seoul S.Korea |
sad. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hello Tina I don't know how to help, i've been depressed too... The only thing that i know is that depression is like a lion... When i smell the odor i run away... Best wishes yann |
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xTr3m3sT Member
since 2008-03-03
Posts 415 |
Yes, I can relate to this poem very well. Great poem. -Angel. |
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shyvl Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531texas, usa |
I always heard that depression feels like a long walk through wet cement. Your comments and description were very moving. Thanks for sharing and hold on to the least bit of sunshine. sharyn |
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TinaTrivett Senior Member
since 2006-07-15
Posts 569 |
shyvl, that is a good description. Thanks all for reading. |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Tina, I hope that depression never truly defeats you. Maybe you are defeating it and it doesn't spend the time with you that it really wants to. Dunno. Just a thought. xoxoo Alison |
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