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NeonKnight
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since 2008-04-12
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New South Wales, Australia

0 posted 2008-04-13 06:33 PM


Fear and Darkness

In dark shadows I walk alone
Apart insane, and isolated
A shadows curse now set in stone
So many see it, they are fascinated
But the shadow hides me inside
Am I afraid? No it never was it
Cast myself down again thrown to one side
Falling again deep into the pit
Trapped isolate but not afraid

I open my eyes and see the night
A view that fill me with fright
I try, and I try with all my might
But I can't get out of here
I feel and I can feel you near
All alone I can see the fear
Creeping up inside again
'Speak, I'm right here, you used to say to me'

SB - 14/4/08

© Copyright 2008 Simon Butler - All Rights Reserved
shyvl
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since 2008-04-11
Posts 531
texas, usa
1 posted 2008-04-13 06:52 PM


Interesting introspection.  I admire your use of language.  Thanks for the pleasure.
sharyn

NeonKnight
Junior Member
since 2008-04-12
Posts 36
New South Wales, Australia
2 posted 2008-04-13 06:59 PM


you are most welcome sharyn, thank you for reading. It means alot to me
Larrysmom
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since 2008-04-03
Posts 533
Florida, USA
3 posted 2008-04-13 11:50 PM


I love this… it makes me feel anxious and hurried. Wonderful write.

Tammy<333

NeonKnight
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since 2008-04-12
Posts 36
New South Wales, Australia
4 posted 2008-04-14 01:53 AM


Thank you so much for reading tammy. As always your words of encouragement are highly valued.
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