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xTr3m3sT
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since 2008-03-03
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0 posted 2008-04-13 04:34 PM


There are many things that infest my mind,
Thoughts of murder, greed, and suicide,
Unable to show compassion or be kind,
For everything that was told to me was a lie.

I am not a bad kid, I just have bad thoughts,
Maybe I shouldn't be thinking these things but I have,
Many battle scars from all the battles I fought.
I have frequent dreams that I take a bath,

In blood and end up slicing my wrists,
There is nothing more that I can give,
My soul is poured out onto this list,
Of all of my poetry so I can live,

A peaceful life, filled with happiness and glee,
A good life, a life where I can be free,
Away from all of this negativity,
So I may be able to think positively,
And end up being the man I want to be,
The man that has a powerful destiny.

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Larrysmom
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since 2008-04-03
Posts 533
Florida, USA
1 posted 2008-04-13 04:38 PM


This is magnificent Angel! Absolutely beautiful…

Keep reaching, you will catch it… As long as you don’t give up.

Tammy<333

xTr3m3sT
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since 2008-03-03
Posts 415

2 posted 2008-04-13 04:39 PM


Thank you very much Tammy, I'm only 14 years old but it feels like I have gone through 5 lifetimes. :[
Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
3 posted 2008-04-13 05:17 PM


Yo Angel,

I once had a dear friend named Angel, about thirty years ago he was killed in an automoblie accident.  He was burnt to a crisp.  

He was a tough guy, smart as a whip, and he had a heart of gold.

My Angel, Felix, and Bobby say you'll do fine.  We advise you not to look for that life of "happiness and glee".  You don't want that.  Just be cool, and take what you can.

Good luck.

Bobby

xTr3m3sT
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4 posted 2008-04-13 05:23 PM


Thank you very much Bobby and Felix for your kind words :]

I will try to take what I can, but so far the hand that feeds passed me by and I am hungry. :[

x-tears-x
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since 2008-04-13
Posts 43
England
5 posted 2008-04-13 05:27 PM


fantastic
Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25
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Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
6 posted 2008-04-13 05:57 PM


Angel,

I’ve been there with hungry, done the garbage can bit.  You'll find a way to get food--if not today, perhaps tomorrow.

Bobby

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