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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2008-04-13 01:04 PM



Some say I use them
and overdue it,
stretching them into
unheard of positions
transforming them
from tall towers of epiphany
into springtime ballerinas
though a thicket of leaves
that tumbles between

they've been cast with personas
and decked out in finery
from vintage oak blues
to philadelphia greens

(and all the unclassified hues between)

they've been brides of august
in white lace and filagree
posing with prime ministers
and articulating in the exhilerating
(breezes)when i scatter them
with red roses and sea chanties

they parallel the very life
that they bear witness to
through my window, their window
alternating between clarity
and the dirt of my ungodliness

when love leaves , they stay
grounded, along with me
bound by tradition, released
part imagination,
part faith that yes
there is always another season

with the fault of redundancy
i may have slapped them at times
with too many storms or ailng romances
(as if there were a difference between the two)

but i honor them today,
for without them,
most days the page
would be inkless.

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2islander2
Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
1 posted 2008-04-13 01:25 PM


Hello Ink, i appreciate the qualities of your poem and your beautiful writing...

  thanks

   yann

shyvl
Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531
texas, usa
2 posted 2008-04-13 01:45 PM


anything that inspires such eloquence must be admired.
thanks
sharyn

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
3 posted 2008-04-13 03:24 PM


quote:
they parallel the very life
that they bear witness to
through my window, their window
alternating between clarity
and the dirt of my ungodliness

when love leaves, they stay
grounded, along with me
bound by tradition, released
part imagination,
part faith that yes
there is always another season



Awesome, dear Michele! Though I am
sure they will protest and say they
never saw any "dirt of ungodliness", they
just see life in all its colors.

Love,
Margherita

Snowflake From Hell
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since 2003-07-10
Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion
4 posted 2008-04-15 01:43 PM


speachless

violence may not be the answer, but it does make good headway

Marge Tindal
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Florida's Foreverly Shores
5 posted 2008-04-15 02:21 PM


InkyOne~
This is as lovely as anything I'll read this day~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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sandgrain
Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662
Sycamore, IL, USA
6 posted 2008-04-15 02:57 PM


And I only stopped here because I live in a city named Sycamore.  So glad I was privilaged to read this beautiful writing.

  Rae

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
7 posted 2008-04-15 09:51 PM


thank you kindly
ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
8 posted 2008-04-17 09:25 AM


Awesome write.
Oh Mich, your voice is strong and clear, a magnificent blend of faith and life.
More!!!  

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
9 posted 2008-04-17 11:22 AM


awesome!


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