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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2008-04-13 07:20 AM

it was that parking lot
with wall to wall nothing
in shadow shoes
the high heel kind
stepping down from oak trees
letting the light shine between
limbs and over secrets

you could have been there
and would be later perhaps
wearing black and smiles
looking around at strangers
wondering what music it was
that you heard in your head
and who was playing it

did they smoke cigars
and ride loud harleys
or were they more suave
in their bentley tin
just letting their eyes out
for a stroll around your curves
which they took slowly

or perhaps it was just a stranger
that didn't fit anywhere
like never been there before
the virgin of first time
and glances that were newly pressed
never worn without being tucked in
but were now unbuttoned handless

and it was you that had undone them
_______________

daark

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

1 posted 2008-04-13 07:38 AM

smiles... now this is a lovely slice of you Mr Daark... thank you! love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

2 posted 2008-04-13 07:50 AM

This brought a smile to my face as well but certainly a smile of appreciation for the looking and the interpreting which you have done in such a masterful way.

Helen

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

3 posted 2008-04-13 08:58 AM

ms r&b, thanks babe for the eyes

____________

ms honeybunch, thank you too for the smile and thoughts

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2008-04-13 02:44 PM

Fascinating, dear D., riding the emotions of your words is almost as exciting as riding a harley (some memory of the past!)

Love,
Margherita

Larrysmom
Senior Member

since 2008-04-03

Posts 533
Florida, USA

5 posted 2008-04-13 04:35 PM

This one makes me feel soft, sultry, while unaware…

Tammy<333

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

6 posted 2008-04-14 05:48 AM

ms mar, thanks hon for the read and review

______________

ms larry'smom, thank you for the peek in and feelings

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

7 posted 2008-04-14 11:19 AM

or perhaps it was just a stranger
that didn't fit anywhere
like never been there before
the virgin of first time
and glances that were newly pressed
never worn without being tucked in
but were now unbuttoned handless

and it was you that had undone them

~*~

I hope that you know when
you write, you should always
expect a heavy, hungry
sigh at the end...

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

8 posted 2008-04-14 10:12 PM

ms sun...I do enjoy your sighs...thanks babe

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

9 posted 2008-04-14 11:09 PM

D

I remember telling my Mom when I was little that "hungry eyes" was a stupid expression and that it should be "honey eyes" (I was a little romantic). Anyway, I have hungry eyes reading this.

Love it,
A

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