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Open Poetry #42

Today’s Goodbye

Virtual Abyss
Member

since 2008-04-09

Posts 52
East Coast - USA

0 posted 2008-04-13 12:05 PM

Todays will be the hardest
Cause it won't be the same
But
You always will have the memory
Of the rain

Holding you close
Not saying a word

Today's goodbye
Is quite absurd

Even thought it's not the same
As the past few days

Who's to blame

Its part of the time
That we live
I hope you'll always be able to forgive

Forgive me for liking you

But being to late

I still got to meet you
And that is fate

So whether we remain friends
Or someday come together

You'll always be on my mind

Forever and ever

Larrysmom
Senior Member

since 2008-04-03

Posts 533
Florida, USA

1 posted 2008-04-13 12:21 PM

This is loving and hopeful… Beautiful write.

Tammy<333

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

2 posted 2008-04-13 12:23 PM

yes very lovely

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

3 posted 2008-04-13 12:25 PM

I did enjoy this Dennis... thank you ... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

4 posted 2008-04-13 02:40 AM

very sad, but hopeful and full of love...

You know you're in love, when you can't fall asleep,because reality is finally better than your dream~Dr.Seuss

effjayel
Senior Member

since 2007-09-30

Posts 1474
At the Crossroads of Infinity

5 posted 2008-04-13 03:26 AM

Not sure which is harder, saying sorry or goodbye.....nice write Dennis

Seoulair
Senior Member

since 2008-03-27

Posts 807
Seoul S.Korea

6 posted 2008-04-14 01:46 AM

very beautiful. Love contains no guilt.

Virtual Abyss
Member

since 2008-04-09

Posts 52
East Coast - USA

7 posted 2008-04-17 11:44 PM

Tammy, JJ, RDB, A Romantic Heart, effjayel, and Seoulair. Thank you all for the replies and the kind words. It was hard to pick the right poem to start with. I'm enjoying this new world I've been introduced to here at pipTalk.

Sincerely,

Virtual Abyss

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