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hiddensmiles
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at the beach... i wish

0 posted 2008-04-12 11:07 PM


shoes
colorful and bright

shoes
comfortable and light

shoes
laced up and tyed

shoes
bring a wonderful delite

you might think
shoes are shoes
and nothing more
maybe even that im crazy

but we should be thankful
that we have shoes on our feet
because that means
were not in total poverty



JJ

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Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2008-04-13 12:09 PM


And also that we have feet.  Joyce
Virtual Abyss
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2 posted 2008-04-13 12:11 PM


How true, practical and refreshing.  I enjoyed this immensely!

V/r,

Virtual Abyss


hiddensmiles
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at the beach... i wish
3 posted 2008-04-13 12:24 PM


thank you
and yes we should be thankful for feet

JJ

Larrysmom
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4 posted 2008-04-13 12:25 PM


This is awesome!!!  And so true, not to mention I’m a shoe fanatic. hahahha

Tammy<333

hiddensmiles
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at the beach... i wish
5 posted 2008-04-13 12:26 PM


thank you, i am too lol

JJ

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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6 posted 2008-04-13 12:49 PM


oooh shoes, did someone mention shoes?? is there a shoe sale near you perchance??   I love shoes!!!  this was very enjoyable to read.. thank you ... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

hiddensmiles
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at the beach... i wish
7 posted 2008-04-13 12:52 PM


lol i am very glad you enjoyed

JJ

Robert E. Jordan
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8 posted 2008-04-13 01:14 PM


JJ,

Ugh--shoes, I can take them or leave them.  

I went shoeless a lot when I was a kid.  I didn't know I was poverty stricken, and still don't.

You might think of using Standard English Language punctuation and capitalization.

Bobby

2islander2
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9 posted 2008-04-13 01:20 PM


Shoes are our friends, you said it with talent, humour...
I'm fond of this kind of poetry...


  best wishes

  yann

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10 posted 2008-04-13 01:32 PM


LOL, Shoes, I wear sandals, very good refreshing poem to start off the day ;]

-Angel.

shyvl
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texas, usa
11 posted 2008-04-13 01:38 PM


I am a barefoot girl myself but I agree about the need for gratitude.
sharyn

hiddensmiles
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at the beach... i wish
12 posted 2008-04-13 04:35 PM


thank you, for your kind words.

JJ

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