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Robert E. Jordan
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0 posted 2008-04-12 07:48 PM


The doctor that broke Felix’s leg
fits him with a nice green cast.  

The doctor chooses green,
because the doctor
has an Irish name.  

The doctor is silly,
and cares about
his so-called heritage.  

Felix feels the doctor
should join the human race,
that would give him
a worth-while heritage.  

But that’s another story.  

The doctor gives Felix
a pair of crutches,
and instructs him to come back
to the clinic
every week for a while.  

Felix thinks to himself,
“Don’t hold your breath doc.”

Bobby

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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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1 posted 2008-04-12 07:57 PM


yes, I'm with Felix, 'silly Dr'! ... who in their right mind would break a child's limbs for research!  hugs to Felix, Bobby.. love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

shyvl
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2 posted 2008-04-12 07:59 PM


Good narrative poem.  I agree with Felix-Don't hold your breath Doc.  Thanks for the pleasure

sharyn

Robert E. Jordan
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3 posted 2008-04-12 08:03 PM


Dear RDB,

You raise a good point.  I often wonder about the sanity of those doctors that actully carried out the experiments this is based on.

Bobby

Marchmadness
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4 posted 2008-04-12 08:15 PM


Hi Bobby, I just have to tell  you this story. When my kids were little and we needed money, My husband and my brother worked on their days off at a car auction.
They worked with a few  other guys, one who had a bad limp. One of the  others, a guy by the name of Farley, made fun of the way he walked all the time. My husband who had polio when he was young and also had a slight limp, would get very angry and was always telling him to lay off.
  One day Farley drove his car into the auction area to show it, got out and walked around to the back and opened the trunk. Just then the guy in the car behind him pulled up, the brakes failed and the car hit him, pinning him between the two cars and breaking both legs. When he finally healed he was left with a very bad limp. That lesson was not lost on me and I can't help but think that horrific doctor got what was coming to him somewhere down the line.
                                   Ida

[This message has been edited by Marchmadness (04-12-2008 11:31 PM).]

Robert E. Jordan
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5 posted 2008-04-12 08:39 PM


Sharyn,

Thanks for the words.  Yes, you're right.  Some doctors like that just have so much arrogance. They actually expect to be thanked for what they did.

It's amazing.

Bobby

Robert E. Jordan
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6 posted 2008-04-12 08:43 PM


Ida,

I think the type of payback that Farley got is fairly common.  There does seem to be real justice in the world.  It's amazing.

Thanks for telling me the story of this Farley guy.

Bobby

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7 posted 2008-04-12 10:35 PM


I can't understand why a doctor would have to break a child's leg when they are always breaking them on their own.  Today he would lose his license.  And Felix would probably be taken into child protective custody.Joyce
Robert E. Jordan
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8 posted 2008-04-12 10:44 PM


Joyce,

I don't know what happened to the doctors that did this back in the sixties.  Probably nothing.  When I read that back in the sixties, it really made me angry.  That's why I'm writing about it now.

Apparently, the beat goes on.

The URL I posted eariler made me angry, that's what brought this old tale to mind.

As far as Felix going into foster care, that's the idea behind this book.  Felix's experiences in foster care.  It was crappy.

He'd be 100% better off staying with his mother, or as we'd call her here, his "old lady".

I was raised by a mother very much like Felix's mother.  Thank heavens I got to stay with her.

Bobby

Larrysmom
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9 posted 2008-04-12 11:49 PM


Giant hugs to Felix…

Tammy<333

hiddensmiles
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10 posted 2008-04-12 11:58 PM


Good write

JJ

Robert E. Jordan
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11 posted 2008-04-13 08:11 AM


Tammy<333,

Thanks Dear, and Felix hugs you right back gigantically.

Bobby

Robert E. Jordan
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12 posted 2008-04-13 08:12 AM


JJ,

Thanks for the kind words.  I'm pleased you enjoyed it.

Bobby

Robert E. Jordan
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13 posted 2008-04-13 08:17 AM


Here is the URL that made me very angry:
http://www.msnbc.msn.com/id/5907667/

See you later, I'm off to Mass.

Bobby

[This message has been edited by Robert E. Jordan (04-13-2008 10:17 AM).]

Robert E. Jordan
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14 posted 2008-04-13 12:29 PM


The bottom line is this society is always ready to risk the health of poor kids, if they think it will benefit rich kids.  Here is more:

http://www.altheal.org/toxicity/house.htm

Bobby

JamesMichael
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15 posted 2008-04-13 03:19 PM


Enjoyed...James
Robert E. Jordan
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16 posted 2008-04-13 03:25 PM


James,

Thanks for the kind words.  I'm very pleased you enjoyed the poem.

Bobby

Margherita
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17 posted 2008-04-13 03:39 PM


Extremely disturbing, dear Bobby. Poor Felix and poor abused children!

So what happened under Hitler's tyranny isn't even the worst one can hear.

The pharmaceutical companies are more interested in accruing their profits than in healing people.

Love,
Margherita

Robert E. Jordan
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18 posted 2008-04-13 03:42 PM


Thanks Margherita,

You've nailed it hon.  Thanks for the great comment.

Bobby

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