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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2008-04-12 01:17 PM



Cruising Down The River
~*Marge Tindal*~

An early morning cruise down the St. John’s River.
How much serenity could this glorious day deliver?
A day of perfection … and quiet reflection.

The Great Blue Heron in the marshes does abide.
Seeking her meal quietly on the side.
Alert she remains in this lens-captured scene,
This … this is totally serene.

Barred Owl sitting there, staring at you
Playing just a little Peek-A-Boo.
Swoops down to the boat when offered a treat,
Swift and on target, he keeps me on the edge of my seat.

Spot an American Alligator, or two,
Protecting her babies as she must do.
She warns us with a hissing sound.
We know we must retreat to higher ground !

The cruise is now over … yet the memories remain,
I plan on taking this trip again.
I hope that you have enjoyed your cruise with me,
"Come back real soon ?" … I ask, with a Southern drawl.
Nice cruising with "Ya’ll"

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -             noles1@totcon.com

© Copyright 2008 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
sandgrain
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1 posted 2008-04-12 02:42 PM


Thanks for the cruise, Marge.  How serene it is, indeed.  Your poetry's a perfect match.

  Rae

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2 posted 2008-04-12 02:56 PM


Oh Gosh, Margie, such beautiful pictures...you've captured...thanks so very much for sharing....

Hugs
Lee J.

Bonnie j
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3 posted 2008-04-12 02:57 PM


Love the cruise you have shared. You near a beautiful place on God's many acre's of land.
Thanks Marge.
Hugs
BonBon

Honeybunch
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4 posted 2008-04-12 03:42 PM


Dear Marge, this is absolutely stunning!  Thank you for sharing your wonderful cruise.

Helen

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5 posted 2008-04-12 03:51 PM


Thank you for sharing such a beautiful cruise.love, Barb
jody5
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6 posted 2008-04-12 04:16 PM


Marge I felt like I was with you and enjoyed the trip very much.

Hugs Kimberly


Betty
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7 posted 2008-04-12 05:09 PM


How utterly awesome Marge!
Oklahoma Rose
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8 posted 2008-04-12 06:46 PM


It was nice taking this cruise with you, too, Marge.
Larrysmom
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9 posted 2008-04-12 06:51 PM


Our river is absolutely gorgeous and your beautiful poetry makes it even more so… Oh this trip down the river was one the very best… Thank you.

Tammy<333

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10 posted 2008-04-12 07:06 PM


Dear Marge:

What a wonderful trip and I enjoyed it so much! wish I could have joined you! Beautiful photos and poetry!

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

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11 posted 2008-04-12 08:20 PM


yaknow that's a little too close for me to that gator!

beautiful pictures! Thanks for sharing the beauty Marge!

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12 posted 2008-04-12 10:49 PM


What an exciting day's outing.  I envy you.  Love, Joyce
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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13 posted 2008-04-13 12:45 PM


Dear Marge... I loved my cruise with you!! thank you so much for sharing... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Margherita
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14 posted 2008-04-13 02:20 PM


While scrolling down the pictures I thought of all the alligators cruising there next to you and there ... you even gave it a close look! I shudder in fear! Wonderful cruise though, spectacular pictures and always lovely words from your inspired pen, dear Marge!
Love,
Margherita

JamesMichael
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15 posted 2008-04-13 09:27 PM


A pleasure to view and read...looks like only Tarzan would dare to swim there...James
Marge Tindal
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Thank you all for enjoying the cruise with me~
It is wonderful to get lost in the beauty of nature-in-surround~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -             noles1@totcon.com

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