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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2008-04-12 09:25 AM



Renewed

Distant, is the threaded pulse of change
Mystic, as the willing heart complies
Sacred, in its faithfulness to range
Silent, while the tongue retracts its lies

Mystic, as the willing heart complies
Languid, so to speak in wetted bliss
Silent, while the tongue retracts its lies
Tenderly, love speaks within this kiss

Languid, so to speak in wetted bliss
Softly, comes alive the message heard
Tenderly, love speaks within this kiss
Clear, the meaning beats within each word

Softly, comes alive the message heard
Calling to the soul renewed and fresh
Clear, the meaning beats within each word
Joyfully expressed upon the flesh

Calling to the soul renewed and fresh
Sacred, in its faithfulness to range
Joyfully expressed upon the flesh
Distant, is the threaded pulse of change

Copyright Kkh 4/12/08

[This message has been edited by ThisDiamond (04-12-2008 10:30 AM).]

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LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

1 posted 2008-04-12 11:10 AM


it is in these times we learn about love and life and cherish it all the more, for how preciously dear are the words from this poet's heart.

Beautiful....

Hugs
Lee J.

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa
2 posted 2008-04-12 11:42 AM


Kathleen - this is a beautiful and meaningful write!
nakdthoughts
Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
3 posted 2008-04-12 03:29 PM


Beautifully done ( forgot what the name of this form is though)
M

Larrysmom
Senior Member
since 2008-04-03
Posts 533
Florida, USA
4 posted 2008-04-12 10:30 PM


I am floored by the tender music of this… Words truly elude me.

Tammy<333

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
5 posted 2008-04-13 01:13 PM


the message comes through
through the beating pulse
of your words that come alive
and awaken

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